If a student has hurt herself and is bleeding, we do not say, “Wait a few days and we will take care of your bleeding.” We help stop the bleeding immediately. However, when a student bleeds academically by showing a serious learning gap, we often delay the necessary treatment.
When a student displays a learning gap such as not being able to write a topic sentence in a composition, we immediately apply the treatment of providing the student with different new strategies. We do not simply re-give the student the original strategy that was unsuccessful for the student. We have a list of different strategies on the class website, blog, wiki, a handout, or a QR code. We write these strategies in student-talk and provide examples. For example, a topic sentence has a topic, like “the school baseball team”, and a strong position or viewpoint about the team such as “will win this Friday”. The complete topic sentence becomes “The school baseball team will win this Friday.”
We provide a variety of differentiated ways for the students to learn the missing concept of a topic sentence such as a written explanation. We can ask students to put a box around the topic and put an arrow ( → ) over the position. Also, we can offer the student a variety of other ways of learning this concept such as Youtubemovie, a podcast, and a visual. The student selects which formative feedback she feels will help her the most. Then, she practices that new strategy so that she improves.
Through the immediacy of formative assessment, we heal the student in their learning. The student does not become injured for the rest of her learning.
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In a previous post, I emphasized that students need an abundance of positive comments before they really believe that what they have done is good.
Likewise, when we examine our comments to students in the margins and at the end of their papers, we may discover that the messages that we think are positive or neutral appear to the students as negative ones. For example, in “Good topic sentence. Follow it up with more evidence” the message seems to us to be a positive; however, the second sentence deflats the praise. The previous examples strikes students as a “set up and slap down” comment.
Students may see our statements or questions as direct commands rather than suggestions. “Can you think of other possibilities?” can easily be translated as “You dummy, why can’t you get a good answer?”
When we write on students’ papers, we have to promote a positive tone since many students will read any non-positive statement as a negative one.
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